JAPANESE DBZ FANS HELP ME!!!!!!! AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!! I'm quite persistant, na?

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Go to my previous question. But I just added a new question. I keep posting it so it'll be in the "New Questions" and people will be more likely to answer it. But here is my newest story:

It'll be basically Gokou starting to build an average snowman, and then Vegeta is jealous that Kakarotto's snowman is better than his so he makes...A SNOW VEGETA KILLING A SNOW KAKAROTTO!!!!!!!!! And he sprays...HAWAIIAN PUNCH all over the snow for blood!!!!!! Lame, yes...Anywho, Vegeta's snowman melts randomly and he is pissed, so he throws snowballs at Gokou's snowman. They all miss (huzzah) and Vegeta gets more furious, so he charges Ki into a snowball and throws it at Gokou. Gokou whines how it wasn't fair, and an all-out war of Gokou and Vegeta Snowball begins. Meanwhile...Gohan (also in a Santa suit...It's just so Kawaii! He's more Kawaii as Super 1, but way much cooler as Super 2, methinks...) goes up to Piccolo-san and tells him he has a Merry Christmas present for him...CHOCOLATE!!!! The happy-as-he-can-get Piccolo gets pissed and tells Gohan to come here...He says it was a sweet thing to do but...Then he grabs him by the head and throws him into a wall, saying "NAMEKSEIJIN DO NOT EAT!!!!!!! WE ONLY NEED WATER!!! IF YOU REALLY CARED ABOUT ME YOU WOULD HAVE KNOWN THAT!!!!!!" Poor Gohan- kun lies bloody on the ground with a "Pi...Kkoro...San...". Sorry I was so mean to my favorite character, but I thought it was funny...Prob'ly not, right? Well that's all I got so any feedback would be nice...GOHAN WA DAI DAI DAI SAIKYOU DESU!!!!!!!!!

And if you liked it please go to my other "Japanese Dragonball Fans Help Me" question that'll be further down on the list. If you didn't like it tell me also cuz I'd like to know if it sucks, BUT BE POLITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really gotta keep drawing this Doujinshii and I NEED HELP!!!!!!!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 20, 2003

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oh yeah i read that on some web site i thought it was very good, i also read that beach one. pretty good, good enofe to be an episode or movie...I keep going back there to see if that story you've been talking about has been updated. last time i looked it stoped at the girls were gohna beat up that powerful human girl and gohan found this thing in space. when are you going to finish it?

-- Anonymous, November 20, 2003

wht r u tlkin about supa gohan 2 didnt wright thse stries she onyl posted em on dis site and thre is no beach stry or gohan in space so srry kid supa gohan 2 onyl rote the stry here and teh ones in her othr questn of japanees fans pleez help me i know she tld me srry kid

-- Anonymous, November 20, 2003

theres the comic write on this web site.. i think it was written by him/she or they're taking credit for somone eles is work, go here and see for you're self, there both very good http://www.madcool.com/mc/comics/dragonball/comic.htm or the one he/she is talking about... http://www.madcool.com/mc/comics/dragonball/t1.htm

-- Anonymous, November 21, 2003

oh wait sorry it sounded like that one but its a bit different but still go here and see them there good. http://www.madcool.com/mc/comics/dragonball/comic.htm http://www.madcool.com/mc/comics/dragonball/t1.htm

-- Anonymous, November 21, 2003

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