A poem i wrote

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The Quest

The Day Is Done
The Night Has Come
The Dawn Is on Her Way
We have Come Thus Far
Our Powers strong
Our weaknesses fadeing away
But Now I See
That It was Me Standing in our way



-- Anonymous, October 20, 2002

Answers

Interesting rhyme scheme, beat patter than I can't quite place, leading me to believe it's some sort of free form poetry. Subject is sketchy at best, guessing "overcoming adversity" is that, but I'm not entirely sure. Misspelling of the word "fading", and odd capitialization choices. I give it a C+/B-.

-- Anonymous, October 21, 2002

I have 1 too,

Tiny salmon swimming in the stream,

-- Anonymous, October 21, 2002


I have one 2

Smoke Grass & go to class.... Go to class & Lick ass....

-- Anonymous, October 21, 2002


What's even scarier are those goddamned wind up dolls that chew holes in your legs. I mean, hello? Ouch?

-- Anonymous, October 21, 2002

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