The Novel. (Discuss, critique, be honest.)greenspun.com : LUSENET : actualsize : One Thread
So. What do you think of the novel in progress? Is it good? Is it bad? Is it so-so?
Do keep in mind that it's being posted as-is, with no pre-editing and no checking for things like continuity or gaping plot holes. Although, if you do see gaping plot holes, please feel free to expose them. I won't mind.
-- Atara (email@example.com), November 05, 2001
I like it. But then, I always liked your writing. It's probably a good thing I didn't hear about this Nano-whatever thing until after it started. If I had tried I'd be in a sobbing heap by now... heh.
About your writing, I really can't see anything wrong with it. The one part says "even if we were allowed, we wouldn't be allowed" or something like that... but that's the only thing that jumped out at me. Pretty impressive for such quick writing (it's a fast read too). Even my journal entries, that are checked, and double checked, have weird stuff in them all the time.
I'm looking forward to see how it ends...
-- echo (firstname.lastname@example.org), November 11, 2001.
I really enjoy this experiment. I have been checking every day or two to read up on the new developments. I think you have a knack for creating charaters a reader can like and relate to well. Keep going!
-- Ellie (email@example.com), November 15, 2001.