any comments would be great

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This is just my second post. Any comments would be great. Thanks. -Erik

-- Erik Korver (bg20044@binghamton.edu), December 05, 2000

Answers

How about cleaning up the dust spots before you post. Maybe a lower shooting angle and dodge the ground a little bit. I still like it though.

-- Ken Cravillion (kenc@execpc.com), December 06, 2000.

Man - rough crowd... but he's right. Can you give us some technical details with your post (film, lens, shutter and aperture, tripod or no, time of day?) - is this fog back in the hills?

I do like the angle you took with the tree and how it's got two large branches that reach up... almost anthropomorphic in that way. Perhaps theres a way you could reshoot this as Ken said which would accentuate this, creating more of the lonely tree really reaching to the sky look.

-- Chris Pencis (cpencis@yahoo.com), December 06, 2000.


The picture was shot early in the morning with Ilford PanF Plus. I used a 28mm lens set at F16 on a tripod to try and get as much detail as possible. Sorry about the dust, i had not noticed it before. I now plan on retaking the picture this winter and possibly this spring trying some different angles. Thanks for the comments.

-- Erik Korver (bg20044@binghamton.edu), December 06, 2000.

I love the tree. I like the composition too... except there's too much boring sky. But I don't think I'd want to crop it. Can you return to the location when the weather is different? A dramatic sky would be a big improvement.

-- Karl Lehmann (outback@gte.net), December 07, 2000.

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