A poem, in honor of Freeze Blade, my Hound Knight who made me a master.

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~Victory Cry~

Icy blade, shield of frost,

Battles won, battles lost.

Times of joy, times of sorrow,

We will be champions on the 'morrow.

Durahan's body, and to make it whole,

Add to it a Tiger's soul.

Skill and power to overcome,

Liked by many, shunned by some.

Training hard, without much rest,

Everyday, to be the best.

To improve your tactics, learn new skills,

And every month, a nutritious pill.

Frozen blade slashing the sky,

Inner strength to get you by.

Parry with shield ice-blue,

And with a final slash, make your mark true.

Dodge and thrust, jump and turn,

Make them feel the frozen burn.

With a final attack, raise you blade to the sky,

And give out your victory cry.

After all the toil and sweat,

You have become the very best.

But there is just one more task,

To get into the Hall, this will be your last.

A White Sueso stands in your way,

With your winning streak, you're sure he'll pay.

Quickly approach, and with a combo of the blade,

You have achieved you goal of eternal fame.

But alas, your armor is old,

And to live on, face the eternal cold.

But your work was not in vain,

Another one will arrive to carry your name.

As the gasses to freeze surround your frame,

Raise your sword to the sky,

And give one last victory cry.

-- Celious (lionmage@hotmail.com), April 15, 2000

Answers

Now that I read it...it's not that good...I guess poetry isn't my thing. But what counts is the feeling and emotion put into it. Laters.

-- Celious (lionmage@hotmail.com), April 15, 2000.

Celious... It's really not that bad... in fact... it's pretty good...

-- ChunDog (ChunDog@theglobe.com), April 15, 2000.

Actually I kinda liked it. Good job Celious(^_^)

-- Magma Bird (flashrun@altavista.com), April 15, 2000.

You really think it's good? THANKS! Laters!

-- Celious (lionmage@hotmail.com), April 15, 2000.

Cool poem, Celious. It's nice.

Squid

-- Squid (water_drake@hotmail.com), April 15, 2000.



not bad but your stories are better. ^_^

-- J (nemesis_7777@yahoo.com), April 15, 2000.

I like it alot!

-- Zack F (fake@dontemailme.com), April 16, 2000.

Cool!!! be seein' ya

-- Phoenix Masta (Kamehameha123@cs.com), April 16, 2000.

You...have...talent...

-- Jello (Jello077@hotmail.com), April 16, 2000.

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