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Here's an initial first pass.

Feedback I'm getting says that the book needs to cohere in a more orderly fashion (currently it's organized freeform and rambling, along the patterns of renga).

SO ---

I'm moving the Essential Elements of Haiku up, to the front of the book, as follows.

Following pps 12-13 (samples of 5-7-5 and freeform), bring in

So the basic idea is to identify and aggregate the book's "core curriculum" -- how's that sound?!

Please play with it yourselves and see.


-- Anonymous, April 05, 2000

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