http://www.image-studio.com/images/flower.jpg Mamyia RZ67 w/90mm, Velvia - My first attempt at flowers with a new camera. Any help is welcomed!

-- Paul Sedillo (dio@5150.net), March 25, 1999

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Mamyia RZ67 w/90mm, Velvia - My first attempt at flowers with a new camera. Any help is welcomed!

-- Paul Sedillo (dio@5150.net), March 25, 1999.

Mamyia RZ67 w/90mm, Velvia - My first attempt at flowers with a new camera. Any help is welcomed! Third times a charm!

-- Paul Sedillo (dio@5150.net), March 25, 1999.

Mamyia RZ67 w/90mm, Velvia - My first attempt at flowers with a new camera. Any help is welcomed! Fourth time is a charm!

-- Paul Sedillo (dio@5150.net), March 25, 1999.

I like the subject, and the out-of-focus green background, but the flower is not sharp, and the dead-center composition doesn't do much for me. Exposure seems right on.

-- Jon McNeill (jon_mcneill@hp.com), March 25, 1999.

I like the centered composition... almost has a painterly quality about it. But it is soft... might also have benefited from a bit of fill- flash to highlight the center of the bloom a bit more.

-- Collin Houseal (collin@discipledesign.com), March 25, 1999.

I would agree with the two comments above, I really like the combination of the green, orange and yellow.

-- tim bulger (tbulger@ualberta.ca), March 27, 1999.

The strongest element of this photo is its quality of light and its color. I would not use a fill flash to ruin it. I can also live with its centered composition. The blurred image is a definite drawback. Better luck next time.

-- Bahman Farzad (bahman_farzad@spotmetering.com), March 27, 1999.