Taken at Ohiopile State Park, SW Pennsylvania. Nikon FE, Tamron 90mm f2.5 Macro, Kodak Gold 100.
-- Bret Harris (breth@apexmail.com), November 23, 1998
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Taken at Ohiopile State Park, SW Pennsylvania. Nikon FE, Tamron 90mm f2.5 Macro, Kodak Gold 100.
-- Bret Harris (breth@apexmail.com), November 23, 1998
Nice work. The only improvement, crop down on the top so that on the "right edge", the width of the "lighter" coloured top rock matches the width of the "wetted" darker rock just at the waters edge.
-- Paul Lenson (lenson@pci.on.ca), November 23, 1998.
I like the strong, graphic shapes in this image and the flow of the water around them. The two rocks in the foreground look a little hot. I think I'd tone them down a bit.
-- Barbara Kelly (kellys@alaska.net), November 24, 1998.
The sweeping curve with the upper texture and color is great. The lower rocks are too bright for me on my monitor. It might be a job for a masking tool in a photo program to tone them down a bit. I like the cropping you did just fine.
-- Micheal Kelly (Kellys@alaska.net), November 24, 1998.