HOW TO HAIKU workshop, August 1greenspun.com : LUSENET : Aware : One Thread
Read and discuss the haiku finalist and grand-prize entries from the August 1 class.
Alumni and civilians, welcome.
-- gary (email@example.com), August 25, 2002
I thought you might be interested in my attempt to put to use what you taught us in the haiku class August 1st. I have been trying to write a haiku every day and have written 14 (?) counting two I saved from the class. After working each of them over several times, I scored them all according to your method. The two with the highest scores are shown below. I would be interested in your comments.
Silent beach houses
still boarded up for winter
girl lifts shell to ear.
dewey orb weaver’s web pearls
catch the light.