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-- rob dalrymple (robd13@erols.com), September 24, 1999
Silence :) I'm not sure what to make of this... The scan looks very soft, I assume the photo is better. I would do some drastic cropping (from the original) and sharpening.
-- Gordon Richardson (gordonr@iafrica.com), September 27, 1999.
I think the elements are there for a great photograph. The only thing I would change is the cropping. The horizon line is right at the 1/3 point, but I still feel that there is too much water. Unlike the sky, the color of the water doesn't vary, so I'd crop more of that out. I also like the sun less in the center. Of course this is all nit-picking, as I'd be happy to have the original on my wall. Here's what I did with cropping:
-- Pat Lehnherr (lehnherr@isd.net), September 27, 1999.
I think that both of the suggested crops are much too severe. I like the water off to the right as it gives the ship a destination. Cropping the image close on the right makes it look like the ship is on a collision course with the sun. The only crop I would make is a little of water from the foreground to bring the ship a little closer. I like the way the horizon interesects the ship, sun just touching the horizon, the graduated sky coloring.
-- John Thurston (John_Thurston@my-deja.com), September 27, 1999.
OK, I'll take a swing at this.What ship is she? Nina? Mayflower? I give up.
-- Bill Smith (f8andbethere@rcn.com), October 11, 1999.
There's a reason that there appears to be no obvious way to post an image to an image critique site, right?
-- Bill Smith (f8andbethere@rcn.com), October 11, 1999.
The instructions are pretty clear, you just need to type the URL properly (in quotes). Unix is case sensitive, so you must type (JPG not jpg - if that is the filename on the server).
-- Gordon Richardson (gordonr@iafrica.com), October 11, 1999.
If this is was taken in Tampa, FL, then you've artfully captured the one boat that ruins my sunsets - I hate thoses canons, even though my kids get a big kick out of them.Actually, I like your original shot and the cropping suggestions offered by others. What are the technical details? Did you use a Cokin or Tiffen graduated or orange filter?
-- chris (mccallister@mindspring.com), October 18, 1999.
Actually you are close, it was taken in Clearwater. I don't know about your boat but this one didn't have any canons. It was some kind of sunset party cruise, I managed to underexpose this shot enough so that the christmas lights hanging from the rigging are not visible. No filters used, it's just pure gulfcoast sunset, underexposed.
-- rob dalrymple (robd13@erols.com), October 18, 1999.