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Let 'er rip! http://www.glamourmodels.com/models/LisaM/LisaM2.jpg

-- Mike Dogue (w2705@aol.com), September 08, 1999

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Your link should look like: <img src="http://www.glamourmodels.com/models/LisaM/LisaM2.jpg">. You need to use the <img> tag.

-- Joe Perrigoue (joe@supply.com), September 09, 1999.


An excellent photo of a beautiful model. Glad to see that your photography is better then your HTML ;_)

I would have reflected a little more light in on the right side of her face, but that's just a matter of personal taste.

-- rob dalrymple (robd13@erols.com), September 09, 1999.


Joe, I think I'd have gone a little softer on the light, on the right, to eliminate what appears to be a 'hot spot' on her right cheek. Then use a little more reflected light on the left, just enough to lighten the darker shadow.

-- Floyd White (n8iv2ca@juno.com), September 09, 1999.

Nice work, Mike. I would have either darkened the bottom of the print or perhaps not cropped all of the breasts; the photo seems to need some "weight" on the bottom....I do like it though...

-- Mark (markphoto@xoommail.com), September 09, 1999.

Hmmm. My firewall at office says your URL is a prohibited site... It lets me access most of photo.net (other than the infamous pcd2668). I guess I will have to look at this image in the privacy of my own home...

-- Gordon Richardson (gordonr@iafrica.com), September 10, 1999.


This is a very good shot. The only thing I find annoying is the hot spot, or light area, on her chest. It keeps drawing my attention away from her face, which I think you did a great job lighting.

-- pat lehnherr (lehnherr@isd.net), September 10, 1999.

What about those white fingers coming out of her cheek? They interrupt her nice cheek contour. I'd have her put her fingers on the back of her neck, then crop to square (cleans up the loose hairs), burn the bottom right corner and have a great portrait with a very strong diagonal! Real nice light! The dark cheek accentates her pale complexion and hair, more fill would detract...t

-- tom meyer (twm@mindspring.com), September 12, 1999.

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