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Canon 1n, 28-70L, E100S
-- Jim Erhardt (jimerhardt@hotmail.com), September 05, 1999
Jim, I like the quality of the light and the mood, but I would have wished a bit more light on left side of the cat's face. His left eye is almost invisible, so are his left whiskers. Also, the cat appears to have no ears - a bit more light there would have been better I think, just enough to show a hint of the ears. Finally, I find the lack of sharpness on the cat's body disturbing (lower left corner).
-- benny stevens (b.stevens@jvc.be), September 06, 1999.
I like the sharp focus on the eyes. Here's my crop
-- Robert Dodson (rad@ox.com), September 08, 1999.
I guess you can't upload in comments. I would just crop it so that the head is centered and only about a .5 inch below the head is visible.
-- Robert Dodson (rad@ox.com), September 08, 1999.