I like the pose, the viewing angle and the 'feel'.(posted 7990 days ago)But I don't like the depth of the shadow on his face, and I don't like the variations in the background/support. The white cloth is very distracting, and the brown thing he's lying on looks like a pair of knees in corduroy trousers and I keep wondering where the person's torso has got to.
This could be interesting if you made the background a uniform shade, preferably dark, and evened out the lighting on him a bit.