Thanks for the feedback so far... keep it coming!
It's interesting to get two such different reactions to the landscape stuff... I think I'll keep it where it is, tho-- the portraits are really the main focus of my work, and I want to have them up front and center.
I agree about the Martha caption... I was waffling back and forth about whether to include that alternate title.. I'll go back to the simple one.
About the images being dark-- I also thought about including a monitor calibration page at the beginning-- I looked at the whole series on a terrible computer lab monitor last night, and then once I calibrated it everything looked a million times better. Here's one from the government that works pretty well:
Once you're calibrated to this target, all of them (save the julia image, which frankly was just a really underexposed polaroid, which I think looks lovely dark) should look bright and balanced.
Can you two go into more detail about why you disagree about the order of the images? I'm curious about this (and I've never recieved much in the way of feedback on my Cape Cod images)...
Thanks again,