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Response to High Key Princess

from Allan Engelhardt (allane@cybaea.com)

Mmm, lovely. The exposure seems to be spot-on. Well done!

A couple of niggles:

  1. The image could probably do with a tighter crop: the expanse of white mesh does not seem to add much value in the compostion for me.
  2. What happened to the right hand index finger? It looks like it's amputated, but I guess it is just out-of-focus? You are not going to throw the background out of focus anyhow, so next time use f11 to ensure the whole baby is sharp, or use f1.4 on a long lens to ensure that only the eyes are sharp and the rest is visibly out of focus. The latter seems to work better in black and white than colour, and I wouldn't really recommend it here: she's simply too cute :-)

But it's a fine picture.

(posted 8419 days ago)

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