(posted 8570 days ago)Brian:
It needs (in my opinion):
- cropping away some of the space at the right,
- to have the third person on the right removed, and
- to have some detail in the leg area of the mother and child -- as it is it is half a sihouette! Wait 15 seconds and they are in the light.
Very nearly there Brian! It's a good location and the mother and child is great. Go back once more -- and then post the results here.