I think there's a bit of a prejudice against erotica (which your pictures seem to be aiming at) on this board. However, since Fashion is just erotica with a few more clothes and taller girls, I don't have a problem with it. As erotica, your other shots aren't quite to publishable standards, but this one is getting close. The lighting really brings out her body, but the background is rather drab and intrusive.(posted 8583 days ago)By the way, have you seen Tom Ruddock's work? He has a commercial site (www.bluenudes.com) which has really amazing contemporary erotica. You can samples and his other work at www.tomruddock.com.
Take a look at these samples of his Blue Nudes work first: http://www.tomruddock.com/west/index.html