Actually, I agree with all of those points. I cropped it partly to fix a problem with her hair and partly because the top she was wearing was a bit distracting; the hairlight is too bright because someone walked off with the boom from the studio I was using and I had to use a snooted spot instead of my strip box; and the makeup artist/hairstylist that I was using is better with color than with b/w (and I already toned down the highlights on her lips!). I also applied too much levels adjustment to this one, which is why the right side of her face is too flat.(posted 8601 days ago)This one (that I also did this weekend) is better all the way around - except for the tilt.
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo.tcl?photo_id=88665&size=lg