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Response to Girls from the Suburbs

from Stuart Hamby (stuhamby@uswest.net)
My spontaneous reaction is this: the photo would look better if you stepped slightly to the right (so the two women don't "overlap") and filled the left-hand side with more of the girl looking down. (You don't need to show the car immediately behind the two women.) In fact, you could even crop out a fair amount of her body (or at least arm), all the while filling more of the frame. That is, you'd have to get a little closer. And I think you could use less DOF to greater effect. The distortion doesn't bother me so much, although I think that if you were even closer (perhaps resulting in MORE distortion) it would have more 'meaning'.
(posted 8715 days ago)

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