Respnse to Girls from the suburbs

Cohesive composition, Yes, the subject is poorly framed in relation to both the second figure and the street. There is no sense of movement, the main figure is looking out of the frame towards??? what is holding her attention? The lack of movement within the street, no moving vehicle, no blurred action, attention is drawn to the main figure but she is static, nothing to relate to as to why she is standing, lethargic, ? indignant from he hand of hip but ???? from the technical side the point of focus leaves much to be desired, the fingers and the distant parked vehicle appear sharper than the head and shoulders, the question arises as to the area of attention...???

Loss of interest as no focal point of attention, No cohesion between subjects and surroundings.

Regards

Jack.

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