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Response to Eggplant, woman's take...

from Allan Engelhardt (allane@cybaea.com)

Now that we have got the mechanics out of the way, perhaps we can talk about the picture...

I love the light in both images. The serpia toning in the woman version is nice: I prefer it to the colder tones of the man.

The idea is wonderful and I look forward to seeing your child image!

What is the shadow in the background of the right hand side? The right arm looks slightly out of place -- perhaps remove it (no, not cut it off! but ask her to hold it behind her back :-)).

I realy like the light and composition of the woman picture. But the subject of the man is completely compelling.

It would perhaps be interesting to get all three (man, woman, child) together in the same image? Bit hard to engineer, I admit, but could create some interesting compositional possibilities? (And some difficult lighting problems....)

Again: great work! Keep them coming.

(posted 8740 days ago)

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