Response to OK I hadda try the preview feature--Nude-ish?

Nice shot Shawn, John Kantor mentioned three points and they are excellent observations. 1)The highlight on her forehead is Hotish; however I don't find this objectional as I feel it adds to the mood. 2)The pillow is distracting and I believe an above poster gave you a remedy for that, the softer material non pattern would add to the mood you are going for. 3)The arm being fleshy or Broad or untoned IS very distracting. I don't think this is due to the 50mm lens being used for the picture, however a longer lens would have reduced its dominance due to subject to lens proximatity. The girls face is lean but I think A) she is pressing her upper arm against her body to cover herself tightly which is making the upper arm appear wider & the 50mm lens closness is intensinfying that. B)Her wrist and forearm is wide and very untoned making it appear overall that her arm is fat. Now I personally feel that overall you did a good job on rendering this subject, but after our few brief discussions through the net I think you desire to excel and I think you are capable. I honestly feel Mr. Kantor is only pointing out the obvious aspects that would stop this pic from being a seller or this model from being used in a commercial venue.

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