Hey Christel, thanks for stopping by...(posted 8806 days ago)You've used the same device in both images, that I recommended to the skateboarding guy, i.e. using a frame within the photograph. Both of your images have the woman's head in a smaller frame within the greater photograph.
Tonality, I think, plays a big part in the greater success of the second image, along with a more lyric gesture. Good work, show us more. (there's no limit here... yet!)... t