I like the first one more, it's more mysterious for some reason. And the wave-thing in the hair of Part 2 is a little distracting. Overall, I think it conveys what you wanted.(posted 8818 days ago)And I agree with Jeff (in the post following this one): why does everything seem so bloody serious with these critiques? Most of the time, it's like nobody has anything good to say.
There's constructive criticism, then there being just plain miserable (even if it's masked in a mockingly half-pleasant tone):
buy a dog for that, eh?...or visit your mother-in-law; then come back and, for christsakes, smile once in a while.
:-)
shawn