Hi Peter,(posted 8837 days ago)I think this image calls for black and white and zooming/cropping in. I find the section of her legs that is above the leggings very distracting. Further, the perspective (angle from which the image was shot) really needs improvement. The use of direct flash made the image flat. I would have liked to see flash from model's left and a soft bounce from camera position. Try again and let us know what happens.