(posted 8817 days ago)I agree with the woman in the background comments: she looks worried (why?) and distracted. Have her look at the other woman with an evil? smile or something. The forground woman OTOH looks like she is really enjoying herself: wonderful!
I disagree with a comment that was made about the background: I like a bit of context. But ideally I would have put a male model in the far background: just blurred so you can't really see him, but not so blurred that you are not sure it is a him.
Maybe without a background model open up one stop to give a little more focus on the women.